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SCRIPT REVIEWS

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WalkerMan

Review For The Healing Mist Script

Excellent

Welcome to FanStory. 

This is a creative and well-composed story script with likeable characters, plausible situations and dialog, and realistic settings. Something about it kept me from feeling the mist had evil intent, and I was pleased to find that I was right. Yes, an open mind and heart make all the difference. I expect Brianna will surprise the agent by renting the house. Nicely done, and aptly illustrated. 
Written: 06-May-2019

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24chas

Review For The Healing Mist Script

Excellent

This was a great read, Emily. It was very creative and engaging from the very first word. I could picture every action in my mind. Your dialogue was great as were the characters. Well done and good luck in the contest. 
Written: 05-May-2019

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Willie P. Smith

Review For Yuletime in the Village

Excellent

I prefer a full rhyming poem, however; this post is very well written and places a picture in the readers mind of the greatest holiday ever. You have described it very well. 
Written: 03-May-2019

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Dolly'sPoems

Review For Yuletime in the Village

Excellent

It's odd reading a Christmas poem in spring time and this is a beautiful presentation, a natural and traditional celebration, I especially like the gingerbread and spiced cider, love Dolly x 
Written: 03-May-2019

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Jennie Phelps

Review For Yuletime in the Village

Excellent

This writing took my imagination immediately to a Norman Rockwell kind of Christmas in the country. You just really brought all that to life. Wonderful work!! 
Written: 03-May-2019

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moongirlwriter

Review For Yuletime in the Village

Excellent

Ya know, it's May. . .and I'm really not ready for Christmas. But, I must say you have painted a lovely picture with this poem. It's almost like a Dickens Christmas Carol. I can even feel the warm fire in that artwork. :)  The best of luck with this beautifully written Christmas sentiment. 
Written: 03-May-2019

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Review For The Scottish Festival Surprise 
Chapter 2 of the book My Short Stories

Excellent

Well, they do say sometimes you just feel a connection to someone immediately and love at first sight is real! What a sweet love story. I would have almost liked to see you add a paragraph in a kind of epilogue so the reader can be assured that the couple remains happy! Like two years or ten years later. 
The only thing I would suggest for improvement is to perhaps break this solid block of text into paragraphs with line breaks for ease of reading. Otherwise it's a delightful story. 
Jan 
Written: 22-May-2019

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